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Offline noentusuke1

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in regards to STORY TIME.
« on: July 01, 2008, 05:38:33 am »
well it seems I have started making story/comments in the forum, and I figure I might as well make them into pieces so I did.

so now when I make a new story time, I'll also add it to this series:

http://www.indyfluency.com/vseries.php?s=584

:D AE dont worry, your auntie nonie will keep up with her story time just for you :P
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Re: in regards to STORY TIME.
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2008, 11:37:08 am »
Yey!
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Re: in regards to STORY TIME.
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2008, 04:03:54 pm »
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Quote from: subliminiminal on December 05, 2008, 10:58:38 pm
parents in DC for the weekend!
and now, for a forty-eight hour music marathon. bwhahahaha
fear me, small yappy dog that lives next door. fear me.
LET'S MOTHERFUCKING RO-oh sweet its frankie valli

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Re: in regards to STORY TIME.
« Reply #3 on: July 01, 2008, 07:33:02 pm »
gahh i feel like writing a story but no ones here for me to make story time comments on.... /:
i could *gasp* write a story on my own accord but  dont find that as fun....
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Quote from: subliminiminal on December 05, 2008, 10:58:38 pm
parents in DC for the weekend!
and now, for a forty-eight hour music marathon. bwhahahaha
fear me, small yappy dog that lives next door. fear me.
LET'S MOTHERFUCKING RO-oh sweet its frankie valli

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Re: in regards to STORY TIME.
« Reply #4 on: July 02, 2008, 11:03:21 am »
Quote from: noentusuke1 on July 01, 2008, 07:33:02 pm
gahh i feel like writing a story but no ones here for me to make story time comments on.... /:
i could *gasp* write a story on my own accord but  dont find that as fun....
Out from a dusty corner, disguised by darkness, a mysterios hooded figure creeps forward, his face obscured by his hand out in front of it, wiping cobbwebs out of his way. Gasping with fear, Süke takes a couple of steps back before sensing that the figure is harmless and not hostile. A faint ray of light from an unseen source illuminates the man's face, and it is only then that Süke realizes that, yes, it is galantee. A sly grin on his ancient face, he casually asks

"What about me?"
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Re: in regards to STORY TIME.
« Reply #5 on: July 02, 2008, 12:06:45 pm »
Quote from: galantee on July 02, 2008, 11:03:21 am
Quote from: noentusuke1 on July 01, 2008, 07:33:02 pm
gahh i feel like writing a story but no ones here for me to make story time comments on.... /:
i could *gasp* write a story on my own accord but  dont find that as fun....
Out from a dusty corner, disguised by darkness, a mysterios hooded figure creeps forward, his face obscured by his hand out in front of it, wiping cobbwebs out of his way. Gasping with fear, Süke takes a couple of steps back before sensing that the figure is harmless and not hostile. A faint ray of light from an unseen source illuminates the man's face, and it is only then that Süke realizes that, yes, it is galantee. A sly grin on his ancient face, he casually asks

"What about me?"

Süke smiles slightly, and steps forward, peering at the hooded figure curiously. The young one and the ancient one peer at each other for a few moments, until she holds out a hand, as if to move the hood back, but hesitates, waiting for some sort of sign of approval, and whispers, the words carrying through the darkness

"what about you?"
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Quote from: subliminiminal on December 05, 2008, 10:58:38 pm
parents in DC for the weekend!
and now, for a forty-eight hour music marathon. bwhahahaha
fear me, small yappy dog that lives next door. fear me.
LET'S MOTHERFUCKING RO-oh sweet its frankie valli

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Re: in regards to STORY TIME.
« Reply #6 on: July 02, 2008, 03:34:40 pm »
What about me? I can't get over how I misspelled "mysterious"...
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“Welcome to the club.”
“Club? What club is that?”
“The International Brotherhood of Lost Dogs. What else? We're letting you in as a certified, card-carrying member. Serial number zero zero zero zero.”
“I thought that was your number.”
“It is. But it's your number too. That's one of the beauties of the Brotherhood. Everyone who joins gets the same number.”

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Re: in regards to STORY TIME.
« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2008, 03:46:48 pm »
Quote from: galantee on July 02, 2008, 03:34:40 pm
What about me? I can't get over how I misspelled "mysterious"...

mysterios.

it makes me think of cheerios.
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Quote from: subliminiminal on December 05, 2008, 10:58:38 pm
parents in DC for the weekend!
and now, for a forty-eight hour music marathon. bwhahahaha
fear me, small yappy dog that lives next door. fear me.
LET'S MOTHERFUCKING RO-oh sweet its frankie valli

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Re: in regards to STORY TIME.
« Reply #8 on: July 02, 2008, 06:08:38 pm »
please... just have some context for me to work with

You know you could have an intro that doesn't have any real plot - save that shit for later in the game - maybe have a LITTLE foreshadow.
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Re: in regards to STORY TIME.
« Reply #9 on: July 02, 2008, 06:13:07 pm »
hey, galantee started it, i just went along.

i rather like starting vague and building on it anyways.
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Quote from: subliminiminal on December 05, 2008, 10:58:38 pm
parents in DC for the weekend!
and now, for a forty-eight hour music marathon. bwhahahaha
fear me, small yappy dog that lives next door. fear me.
LET'S MOTHERFUCKING RO-oh sweet its frankie valli
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