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Offline imagination

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Re: Under appreciated
« Reply #15 on: August 09, 2008, 08:30:27 pm »
My two latest works have recieved one comment between them.  :(
I don't care if it's constructive criticism or even 'this is shit.' I would just really like SOME feedback.
PLEEEEASE??
http://www.indyfluency.com/v.php?p=1842
http://www.indyfluency.com/v.php?p=1851

Also, it would be great if you looked at this piece too, just while I'm on it...
http://www.indyfluency.com/v.php?p=1835

Thankyou!
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Re: Under appreciated
« Reply #16 on: August 09, 2008, 08:36:36 pm »
geeze she's needy. they've been up, what a day? ;)
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Re: Under appreciated
« Reply #17 on: August 09, 2008, 08:56:59 pm »
Quote from: burning_sands on August 09, 2008, 08:36:36 pm
geeze she's needy. they've been up, what a day? ;)

Yeah I am needy, thanks for noticing. I will settle down after a while... and only the first one has been up for a day! Gosh, I'm not that bad  :P
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