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Augustus Prairie
« on: November 16, 2006, 06:13:54 pm »
Yeah, I started a new series today.  Don't know what to call it yet, mostly 'cuz I'm not entirely sure what it's about, but I got a good idea, and a good feeling about it.  As it stands, I probably won't know much more about what's goin' on than you for a while.  Chances are it won't make much sense toward the end, anyway.

So, for now, go check it out and tell me what you think.
« Last Edit: January 23, 2007, 09:44:02 pm by InTheCafeteria »
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Re: New, currently untitled series.
« Reply #1 on: November 18, 2006, 09:23:18 pm »
Commented. :D I like it.
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Re: New, currently untitled series.
« Reply #2 on: December 02, 2006, 06:57:50 pm »
Alright, to anyone who still reads it, and have been wondering when another part will be posted, it'll probably be a little while longer.  I have finals this coming week, and I think being prepared for them is slightly higher on the rung of things to do.

You know, making shit up as I go along always seems a lot easier at the start, but once you get furhter into something, you start to realize that you need to start planning.  If you don't plan stuff, nothing goes anywhere.  Like, at all.  By now I actually do have a half decent idea as to where the story's going, but getting it into writing and making it all flow right is another story.

So right now, any writing I get up will only make it up because it was honestly easier to concieve.

That's all, thanks.
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Re: Augustus Prairie
« Reply #3 on: January 23, 2007, 09:45:08 pm »
Alright, part 7's finally up.  Honestly, I'm not sure I like it, but I'm tired and it's high time it was put up.  I'll probably go back and edit it later, as well as some other chapters.  But remember, not until later.

Go check it out, though.  It may not be my best work, but I wrote what I meant.
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Re: Augustus Prairie
« Reply #4 on: January 24, 2007, 05:26:07 am »
gunz...
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Re: Augustus Prairie
« Reply #5 on: March 13, 2007, 09:27:57 pm »
part 7 has been edited.  Long overdue, I know, and it' still not up to part with the other chapters, I don't think.  Honestly, I didn't do a whole lot of editing.  The only part that really makes any difference is the ending.

Also, I'm hoping this means I'm gonna have a part 8 up sometimes relatively soon.  Maybe this week?

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Re: Augustus Prairie
« Reply #6 on: April 26, 2007, 06:21:22 pm »
part 9 is up.

http://indyfluency.com/v.php?p=678

Also, I went back and did some minor editing to parts 7 and 8.  Not especially important, except for maybe some of the dialog in 8.
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Re: Augustus Prairie
« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2007, 05:16:40 pm »
Please to observate wonderful new poetry thank you much!
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Re: Augustus Prairie
« Reply #8 on: April 28, 2007, 06:39:08 pm »
Please do not bump your pieces in my piece thread.  Especially if you haven't even bothered to read mine.

That's what making your own thread is for.
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Re: Augustus Prairie
« Reply #9 on: April 29, 2007, 09:12:09 am »
Jeez, I did read yours. ALL of em. Voted too.
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Re: Augustus Prairie
« Reply #10 on: April 29, 2007, 10:47:52 am »
Well, thank you.  Greatly appreciated.  Sorry fer bein' snippy.

Still, though.  I'd appreicate it if you didn't use my thread to promote your piece.

Jus' sayin'.
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Re: Augustus Prairie
« Reply #11 on: July 19, 2007, 10:54:21 pm »
part 11 is up, to those interested.  It gets more into exposition and a little less pretty writing than I'm used to.

Though I guess finally knowing a shit-load more about what's going on than you did can be important, too....
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Re: Augustus Prairie
« Reply #12 on: September 30, 2007, 11:13:33 am »
It's over.
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